Untouched - 18 Jan 26

Vic Steadman – Moon in the Mist

Description

A soft monochrome image showing mist with a small crescent moon emerging from a smooth tonal gradient.

Good points

Very atmospheric and tranquil.

The moon provides a quiet point of focus.

Smooth tonal transitions work well.

Strong sense of stillness and mood.

Possible improvements

The moon is very subtle and may not register immediately.

Slight local contrast around the moon could improve clarity.

Vic Steadman – Quiet Bridge Reflection

Description

A monochrome scene of a stone bridge crossing still water, with soft reflections and winter trees framing the background.

Good points

Calm, balanced composition with pleasing symmetry.

Reflections are subtle and not overpowering.

Tonal range is gentle and appropriate to the mood.

Monochrome suits the subject and season.

Possible improvements

The image is very understated and may benefit from slightly stronger tonal separation.

A clearer focal anchor could help draw the eye more quickly.

Vic Steadman – Branches in Flow

Description

A high-contrast monochrome image of fallen branches cutting diagonally across flowing water.

Good points

Strong diagonal lines give the image energy and structure.

Excellent contrast between smooth water and textured branches.

Monochrome processing emphasises form and pattern.

The composition feels deliberate and confident.

Possible improvements

Dense texture in places may compete for attention.

Slight simplification could strengthen the main flow.

Tim Ravenscroft – Misty Dawn Silhouettes

Description

A winter landscape showing a small group of trees emerging from low-lying mist, with a warm-toned sky and darker foreground.

Good points

Strong sense of atmosphere and depth created by the mist layers.

The silhouetted trees form a clear and readable focal point.

Warm sky tones contrast nicely with the cooler land below.

Simple composition that suits the subject well.

Possible improvements

The subject is familiar, so further differentiation would rely on light or timing rather than composition.

A slightly lower crop might reduce the dominance of the sky if desired.

Norman – Blue Hour Horizon

Description

A simple colour image showing buildings silhouetted against an evening sky.

Good points

Clean composition with a well-placed horizon.

Attractive sky colour and smooth gradient.

Clear separation between sky and land.

Possible improvements

The subject is straightforward.

An additional element of interest could lift the image.

Norman – Evening Garden Geometry

Description

A colour image of planters, garden space, and buildings under a soft evening sky.

Good points

Repetition of planters adds rhythm to the composition.

Good foreground-to-background structure.

Calm, domestic mood.

Natural colour and exposure.

Possible improvements

The scene feels quite static.

A clearer focal point could strengthen the image.

Norman – Setting Sun Flare

Description

A colour image capturing the low sun with strong flare across a residential landscape.

Good points

Warm light creates atmosphere and energy.

Flare reinforces the sense of time and direction.

Well-timed capture.

Possible improvements

Highlights dominate and reduce detail.

The brightness can make it harder for the eye to settle.

Norman – Balcony at Dusk

Description

A colour image looking out from a balcony over gardens and buildings in fading evening light.

Good points

Pleasant, natural colour palette.

Clear sense of viewpoint and everyday observation.

Foreground elements help frame the scene.

Balanced exposure.

Possible improvements

The subject matter is familiar.

A stronger compositional emphasis could increase impact.

Vic Steadman – Barely There

Description

A very high-key monochrome image with faint grasses or reeds emerging from an almost white background.

Good points

Brave use of minimalism and negative space.

Subtle subject encourages slow, careful viewing.

High-key approach feels intentional rather than accidental.

Strong conceptual restraint.

Possible improvements

The subject is extremely delicate and may be missed at first glance.

A touch more tonal separation might help guide the viewer.